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第一册１．……孩子爱阿婆的事迹··很多……阿婆爱孩子的事迹··也很多……（《这不是一颗流星》Ｐ６）事迹一般指“过去做过的比较重要的事情”,在此处有些大材小用,改为“事例”似更妥当一些。２．……那笨拙的丑态··立刻引起人们一阵哄笑。（《这不是一颗流星》Ｐ...
The first volume ...the children love the deeds of her grandmother....a lot of...her deeds of love for children...a lot of... (“This is not a shooting star” P6) Deeds generally refer to “more important things that have been done in the past”. Something overkill and changing to “cases” might seem more appropriate. 2. ... The clumsy ugly state immediately caused people to laugh. (“This is not a meteor” P...