问茉莉妈妈孩子的作文要么细节描写缺乏,要么写得很啰唆。请问怎样在文章中加入适当的细节描写,使文章熠熠生辉?答出现这个问题,可能因为是孩子不清楚细节描写到底有什么用处。既然不清楚它的用处,自然不能在恰当的位置展开恰当的细节描述。细节,是为了帮助作者传情达意,要实现这个写作目的而展开描写。所谓最适合插入细节描写的位置,其本质就是对于你想要重点表达的对象要不惜 Asked Jasmine mother children’s writing or lack of detail description, or write very abetting. May I ask how to add the appropriate details in the article description, make the article shine? Answer this question may be because the child is not clear what is the use of the details of the description. Since it is not clear its usefulness, naturally can not in the right place to expand the appropriate details. Details, is to help the author express his feelings, to achieve the purpose of this writing to start the description. The so-called most appropriate place to insert the details of the description, the essence is that you want to focus on the object to be worthy of