看了《新疆新闻界》第4期稿件评介栏《主题好手法新——试评录音通讯《鸾凤和鸣>》及原作,想谈一点不同意见。如果不是评介文章点明这篇录音访问记的主题是“抓市场问题,表现主人公的开拓精神”,我从原作一下子还领悟不到。广播稿很讲究主题集中、突出,《鸾凤和鸣》的最大弱点恰恰是主题分散、节外生枝,而且对主题的表现浅尝辄止。前三段约600字是背景材料,拉得太开,背景是为了说明主题的,与主题无关的部分可以浓缩提炼。接下去是访问朱峰和王素梅,大约又有五六百字。朱峰所谈主要是珍珠鸡的营养价值、饲养方法、引进情况,也属背景材料。王素梅所谈是受主人公的帮助扬起生活的风帆,沾了点边,但同作者所要表现的“抓市 Read the “Xinjiang press” No. 4 manuscript review column “theme of a good new approach - Comment on the recording communication” Feng Feng and Ming> “and the original, would like to talk a little different opinions. If it is not a review article to point out that the theme of this recording interview is ”grasping the market issue and showing the pioneering spirit of the protagonist,“ I can not comprehend it from the original. Broadcasting is very focused on the theme of concentration, outstanding, ”Feng Feng and Ming,“ the biggest weakness is precisely the theme of decentralization, extracurricular, and the theme of the performance of easy to run. The first three paragraphs of about 600 words are the background material, pulled too open, the background is to illustrate the theme, the theme irrelevant parts can be condensed and refined. The next is to visit Zhu Feng and Wang Sumei, there are about five or six hundred words. Zhu Feng talked mainly about the nutritional value of guinea fowl, feeding methods, the introduction of the situation, is also a background material. Wang Sumei talk about the protagonist’s help to raise the sail of life, touched a little edge, but with the author’s performance of the ”catch market