编者推荐:宽题窄做,只就性格说区别,同时只就性格的“持之以恒的自制力”说区别,从而确立文章主旨“面对诱惑要有持之以恒的自制力”——凸显话题的某个侧面。此文还需要升格:文章在表述主旨中的“大事”时,能紧扣标题中的“别”字,用“此举为刘邦赢得了‘仁义’的美名”和“项羽得‘残暴’的恶名”进行对比;应在此基础上,深入分析——指出“自制力”的重大意义——“得民心者得天下”。 Editor’s recommendation: wide and narrow questions, only to say the difference between the character, but at the same time only on the character of “persistent self-control ” to say the difference, thus establishing the article subject “face to the temptation to have perpetual self-control ” - highlighted One side of the topic. This article also needs to be upgraded: when the article describes the “event” in the subject, the article can be closely linked to the word “Don’s” in the title. Using “this move will win Liu Bang’s reputation for ’Benevolence’” and “Chen Yude’s brutality’s notoriety” is compared; on this basis, in-depth analysis should be carried out to point out the significance of “self-control ”--“the people who have the hearts and minds of the world”.