获奖原因:小作者没有就题论题,而是很巧妙地将题目的素材融入到事件中去,成为文章承上启下的有机构成体。这样的做法,很明显带来了良好的效果:“父亲”的教育不再死板,而是为“我”量身定做;“我”的忏悔不再流于表面,而是发自肺腑的真心悔改。如果我们家长老师的每一次教育都像文中这样“因地制宜”就好了!作者深刻地挖掘了故事的内涵,也从中获得了更真实深远的启示。相信读者们看了也一定会从中悟出道理来。 Reasons for the award: The younger author did not have a topic, but rather skillfully integrated the material of the topic into the incident and became an organic part of the article. This practice has obviously brought good results: “Father” education is no longer rigid, but tailor-made for “I”; “I” repentance is no longer on the surface, but from the heart of the heart repentance. If every education of our parents and teachers is just like “individual conditions” as in the text, the author has profoundly explored the connotation of the story and has gained more real and far-reaching revelation from it. I believe that the readers will also see the truth from this.