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叶圣陶说:“我们不能只思索作文的法度、技术等问题,而不去管文字的原料—思想、情感等等问题,因为我们作文,无非想着这原料是合理、是完好,才动手去作的。”学生作文之所以造假成风,情感缺失,泛泛而谈,缺少打动人心的力量,是因为作文教学缺少一种直指人心的力量,没有真正触及到学生心灵,引发情感共鸣。就此笔者以两个教学片段来做一点比较说明。【片段一】(《说真话,抒真情》作文教学片段)师:广州留给人们的亚运记忆不仅是金灿灿的奖牌,还有沉甸甸的感动。翻开珍藏的广州亚运日记,虽然我们不能一一记住他们的
Ye Shengtao said: “We can not just think about the composition of the French, technical and other issues, not to control the text of raw materials - thoughts, emotions and so on, because we write, nothing more than think of this material is reasonable, is intact, only to go ”The reason why the composition of students make fraud, lack of emotion, generalization, the lack of inspirational force, because the composition of teaching a lack of direct human strength, did not really touch the soul of students, triggering emotional resonance. In this regard, the author to do a little comparison of two teaching clips. [Fragment one] (“Tell the truth, to express the true feelings of” composition teaching fragment) Teacher: Guangzhou left the people’s Asian Games memory is not only a golden medal, there are heavy moving. Open the collection of Guangzhou Asian Games diary, although we can not remember them one by one