写作难点:写得很长很多,散乱,为什么?作文写成流水账,写得散和乱,乏味,是因为作者有一些可以叙述的内容,但这些内容是粗糙和散乱的,没有理清思路,不知取舍,因为没有线索引领他们去挑选、理清,内容串联不起来。这时候,就算写了,也是材料堆砌,东一句西一句,只有表面的铺陈,没有主题。反之,作者心里有了主题,急于表达却没有内容,也同样会失败。有了内容,可以去挖掘主题。挖掘了主题,还可以更加努力围绕主题组织 Writing difficulties: writing a lot longer, scattered, why? Writing into a running account, writing scattered and chaotic, boring, because the author has something to describe, but the content is rough and scattered, did not sort out the idea, I do not know Choose, because there is no clue to lead them to pick, sort out, the contents of the series is not up. At this time, even if written, but also material piling up, a sentence from the west, only the surface of the exhibition, there is no theme. On the contrary, the author has the theme of the mind, anxious to express but no content, it will also fail. With the content, you can dig to the topic. Mining the theme, you can also work harder around the theme organization