在新年的喜庆气氛里,农村中不良风气大有抬头之势,一时赌博成风而不顾利害。面对现实,我强烈地感到确实应该尽早让高雅文化占领农村阵地。该文的写作动机正基于此。 老师看了我的作文之后,当即提出三条修改意见:一是文章题目不妥,原题为“年夜走一趟”,建议我换一个比较含蓄而又与中心有关的题目,于是我就改用“年夜有风”。这样,全文以行踪为 In the festive atmosphere of the New Year, the unhealthy atmosphere in the countryside is on the rise. Sometimes, gambling becomes a trend regardless of profit. In the face of reality, I strongly feel that it is indeed true that an elegant culture should occupy a rural front as early as possible. The motivation for writing is based on this. After reading my essay, the teacher immediately put forward three amendments: First, the article title is not proper, the original title is “Going all out,” suggesting that I change a more subtle topic related to the center, so I will change With “big wind”. In this way, the full text of the whereabouts of