一个春日的下午,我意外获得了扬州作家郭翔赠送的散文集《萤火虫的舞蹈》,细读一遍,真是受益匪浅。一是描写特别细腻。如写春天的柳树:“几场小雨过后,水边杨柳的新芽已初具雏形,像一行行的五线谱,在春风中摇漾着春天的序曲。”生动形象地写出了初春柳枝的最初变化,充满生机和希望。“柳树们都萌芽了,心急的已展开一两片小叶。”用拟人的修辞手 A spring afternoon, I accidentally won the Yangzhou writer Guo Xiang essay collection “fireflies dance”, read it again, really benefited. First, the description is particularly delicate. Such as the spring of willow: “After a few light drifts, the water’s willow buds have begun to take shape, like a line of clef, in the spring breeze marching the overture of spring.” Vividly portrayed the early spring willow The first changes, full of vitality and hope. “Willow buds are sprouting, impatient has launched one or two leaflets. ” Use of anthropomorphic rhetorical hand