辅导点拨作者通过仔细观察,把绿豆的生长过程写得很完整。习作语言生动,在作者的笔下,读者能够看到绿豆发生的每一次细微的变化,也能感受到作者对绿豆的每一分期盼。2015年10月1日星期四天气:晴今天放学回家,我抓了一把绿豆,想做绿豆发芽的实验。我拿起一颗绿豆捏在指尖,仔细看它。它摸上去硬硬的,像一块坚硬的小石子。它是绿色的,很小,圆圆的,头上有一条细长的线,中间有一个小圆点,我想,嫩芽应该是从这里长出来吧。我把它们全部放在水里浸泡了大约12小 Counseling point by careful observation of the author, the process of growing mung bean very complete. Written in vivid language, in the author’s pen, the reader can see every minute subtle changes in mung bean, but also feel the author of each point of mung bean looking forward. Thursday, October 1, 2015 Weather: Clear Today after school, I caught a mung bean and wanted to experiment on mung bean germination. I picked up a mung bean pinch at your fingertips, look carefully at it. It feels stiff, like a hard pebble. It is green, small, round, with a slender line in the head and a small dot in the middle. I think the shoots should grow from here. I put them all soaked in water for about 12 hours