2020年考研英语(二)作文试题评析

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  一、小作文
  Directions:
  Suppose you are planning a tour of historical site for a group of international students. Write them an email to
  1) say something about the site, and
  2) give them some tips for the tour.
  You should write about 100 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not use your own name at the end of the email. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
  本题假设考生正准备组织留学生去一处历史古迹游览,要求考生给留学生们写一封电子邮件,介绍一下该历史古迹,并给他们一些游览建议。电子邮件的格式与书信相同,都是从称呼写起。由于这封邮件是写给留学生们的,所以称呼不妨写Dear friends。称呼要顶格写,后面用逗号。
  这封电子邮件的正文可以写成三段。第一段表明写这封电子邮件的目的——通知留学生下周六要去一处历史古迹游览。这道作文题目中有两个交际任务需要完成,但这两个任务应有所侧重,突出重点。我们宜把介绍该历史古迹作为重点在第二段中详细展开。第三段简要地向留学生提两点游览提示,并留下联系方式。邮件的最后是署名,写在正文下方中间偏右的位置,分两行书写,上一行可写Yours sincerely,下一行写Li Ming,上下对齐。下面请看参考范文:
  Dear friends,
  I am writing to inform you that we are going to visit the Yuyuan Garden on December 28. The tour is part of the program designed for you to experience Chinese culture.
  Built in the Ming Dynasty, the 400-year-old Yuyuan Garden sprawls over 20,000 square meters. It is celebrated for its classical architecture, quaint furniture and exquisite brick-carving. Dotted with ponds, pavilions and rockery, it is known as a jewel of gardens in regions south of the Yangtze River.
  Please wait at the main gate of our university at 8:00 a.m., December 28. We will go there by coach. You can reach me at 12345678910 if you have any questions.
  Yours sincerely,
  Li Ming (116 words)
  二、大作文
  Directions:
  Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
  1) interpret the chart, and
  2) give your comments.
  You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
  我們在写这篇图表作文之前要仔细读图。首先,图表的标题是“某高校学生手机阅读使用情况”,所以我们要把本文的讨论范围限制在大学生使用手机进行阅读的方面。其次,我们还要正确理解图表中的数据:该校学生在手机上所花的时间中有58%用来学习,有28%用来查资料,有12%用来娱乐。不能把图表中的数据理解为58%的该校学生用手机学习,28%的学生用手机查资料,12%的学生用手机娱乐。
  这篇图表作文宜写成三个段落。第一段先指出图表所反映的内容——中国某高校学生使用手机阅读的情况,然后描述图表中的数据。为了使描述条理清晰,我们不妨按照从大到小的顺序依次描述,并尽量避免措词单调。第二段分析这些数据背后的原因。首先分析为什么该校大学生在使用手机时把大部分(58%)的时间用于学习:随着科技的发展,手机上出现了大量的应用软件,使学习变得更加轻松。接着分析为什么该校大学生花28%的时间用于查资料:现在手机的功能强大,大学生在做研究时能够通过手机方便地获取大量资料。最后,分析为什么该校大学生花12%的时间用于娱乐:在学习和研究之余,大学生需要通过一些娱乐换一换脑筋。第三段总结全文,先指出技术正在改变我们的学习方式,学生仅靠书本获得知识的时代已经过去,然后建议大学生在学习中要充分利用新技术。下面请看参考范文:
  The pie chart above demonstrates how students of a Chinese university use their mobile phone for reading purposes. According to the chart, 58% of the students’ time with their mobile phone is devoted to studying, followed by searching for information (28%) and entertaining themselves (12%).   What’s behind these figures? With the advancement of technology, there have appeared a variety of learning applications in the app store, making learning much easier for university students, which explains why the lion’s share of their time is spent on their work. Besides, the students can have a wealth of information at their fingertips via the magic device when doing research. That is why they devote 28% of their time to looking for information. The students spend 12% of their time on entertainment because they need some fun to give their mind a rest.
  Technology is transforming the way we learn. Gone are the days when students only get knowledge from books. It is therefore advised that college students take full advantage of new technology in their learning. (178 words)
  语言亮点借鉴:
  1. With the advancement of technology, there have appeared a variety of learning applications in the app store, making learning much easier for university students, which explains why the lion’s share of their time is spent on their work. 隨着技术的发展,手机应用商店里出现了各种应用软件,让大学生的学习变得更加轻松,这就是为什么他们把大部分手机阅读时间用在学习上。the lion’s share of最大的一份。
  2. Besides, the students can have a wealth of information at their fingertips via the magic device when doing research. 此外,学生在做研究时可以通过这款奇妙的设备轻松获得大量信息。have sth at one’s fingertips掌握。
  3. Gone are the days when students only get knowledge from books. 学生仅通过书本获取知识的时代已经过去了。
  4. It is therefore advised that college students take full advantage of new technology in their learning.因而建议大学生在学习中充分利用新技术。“It is advised that…”是一个提建议的常用句型。
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