在小学阶段的习作训练中,人物的描写占很大的比重。而能把人物写“活”,使人读后如临其境、如见其人、如闻其声,其实是一件很难的事。有些同学一拿起笔来就感到没词儿,原因之一就是不会描写。下面我给大家介绍两篇作文,大家对比着看一看,你一定会有收获的。 In the primary school stage training, the description of the characters account for a large proportion. However, it is actually a hard matter to write “live” characters and make people feel at home after reading them. One of the reasons why some students feel no words when they pick up a pen is that they do not describe it. Now I will introduce two essays, we take a look at contrast, you will have the harvest.