小朋友练写一段话,不仅应该按照一定顺序进行,还必须抓住一个重点叙写。因为仅仅是一段话,所以只能有一个重点,抓住这个重点写,要有主有次,有详有略。这样写出的“段”,才能给别人留下较为深刻的印象。否则,平均使用力量,胡子眉毛一齐抓,人家读后,一定得不到要领,更不要说印象之“深刻”了。 Children write a passage, not only in accordance with a certain order, we must also seize a keynote. Because it is just a passage, we can only have one important point. To grasp this important point, we must have a master and a second. The “paragraph” written in this way can give others a more profound impression. Otherwise, the average use of force, beard eyebrows caught together, people read, will not get the essentials, not to mention the impression of “profound.”