Hello， everyone. Let’s have a discussion about problems. These days we often have a lot of worries. Don’t worry. Problems and worries are normal in life.
　　My friend Krystal has a problem with her relationship. Why？ She is a shy and quite girl， and she doesn’t like talking with classmates， unless we talk to her. I told her talking to someone helps a lot， smiling at everyone is a good way to improve relationship. Now， she is outgoing and is getting more outgoing and popular in class.
　　I also have a problem with my schoolwork. I’m not good at math and Chinese. I really worry about them because the two subjects are very important in life. I’m a little afraid to ask my teach about my questions. So I decide to change it. I’ll make a term plan for schoolwork and often talk with my teachers about my questions.
　　All in all， it will not be difficult to solve problems as long as you are always brave to face them and try your best. Also， you can share problems with someone you trust to talk to and solve them together.
　　王泉老师点评：
　　本篇是以麻烦事为话题的短文，作者抓住话题核心， 运用总分总格式，通过口头报告方式阐述朋友与自己的麻烦事。整篇文章主题突出，语言运用比较灵活多变，特别是作者恰当而有创意地运用了新学的词句，让文章生色不少。不过文章结构不是很紧凑，结论性的话应该在最后一段说。文中还出现了一些表述不当或错误之处。
　　Hello， everyone. I’m going to say something about how to face problems. As we are growing， we often have a lot of worries. Here are some examples.
　　My friend Krystal has a problem with relationship. Why？ Because she is a shy and quiet girl， and she doesn’t like talking with classmates unless we talk to her. I often tell her that talking to someone helps a lot， and smiling at everyone is a good way to improve relationship. Now， she is getting more and more outgoing and popular in class.
　　I also have a problem with my schoolwork. I’m not good at math and Chinese. I really worry about them because the two subjects are very important in life. And I’m a little afraid to ask my parents about my questions. So I decide to change it. I’ll make a term plan for schoolwork and often talk with my teachers about my questions.
　　Problems and worries are normal in life. But don’t worry. It is not difficult to solve problems as long as you are brave enough to face them. When you have problems， you can share them with someone you trust or talk to your teachers. They are sure to help you！