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放风筝高手张翟(6岁油画棒画)教师点评:这幅画的画面比较富有童趣,是作者内心感受的流露。整个画面构图协调,富有变化,体现了小作者大胆表现主题,很好地驾驭画面的能力。放风筝一直是孩子们所喜欢的一种游戏。画面上,孩子们悠闲地放着风筝,每只风筝都不相同,引来了其他小朋友的观看,孩子们指指点点,更是流露出羡慕的神情。值得一提的是,作者采用颜色的渐变作为底色让画面不再显得平淡,增强了画面的厚重感。如果小作者能将放风筝时的表情画得丰富些,这幅画给人的感觉会更好。
Kite master Zhang Zhai (6-year-old oil painting stick) Teachers Comments: This picture is more childlike play, is the author’s inner feelings of the show. The composition of the entire picture coordination, rich changes, embodies the performance of small authors bold theme, a good ability to control the screen. Kite flying has always been a game that kids love. On the screen, the children laid kites in a leisurely manner, each with a different kite, which attracted the attention of other children. The children were pointing at each other with a more envious expression. It is worth mentioning that the author uses the color gradient as background to make the picture no longer appear dull, and enhance the sense of heavy picture. If the younger author can express the riches of the kite at the time of painting, the painting gives a better impression.