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1.一锤定音巧开头。文章开头最忌拖拖拉拉,三纸无驴;好的开头都是开篇二三句或点出记叙重点,埋下行文线索,或明确主要思想、奠基感情基调。这样的开头,简洁洗练,直截了当,会给读者一目了然的感觉。例如朱德的散文《回忆我的母亲》一文的开头,堪称一锤定音的典范。首句“得到母亲去世的消息,我很悲痛”交代写作缘由,次句先以“我爱我母亲”定下感情基调,再用“特别是她勤劳的一生”表明叙事线索,后用“很多事情是值得我永远回忆的”点明主旨。短
A hammer sound the beginning. The article at the beginning of the most avoidable procrastination, three paper no donkey; a good beginning is the beginning of the first two or three points out of focus, clues buried lines, or clear the main idea, the foundation of emotional tone. This beginning, simple and concise, straightforward, will give readers a clear understanding of the feeling. For example, Zhu De’s essay “Memory of My Mother,” the beginning of the article, can be called a final word. The first sentence “get the news of the mother’s death, I am grieved ” account of the writing reason, the second sentence first to “I love my mother ” set the emotional tone, and then “especially her industrious life ” shows the narrative Clues, after use “a lot of things is worth my memories forever ” point out the theme. short