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一、题眼结构辨别上的失误。86年,福建中考作文题为《我和小人书》。题目的结构是并列式的名词短语,考生只要抓住既是题眼又是连词的“和”字做文章,一般不会走题的。可惜不少人却掉以轻心,瞧不起一个“和”字,在作文过程中,不知不觉以“的”代“和”,题旨一变,内容全歪。于是出现了:“我的小人书有一千多本,有《三国演义》、《水浒》、《岳飞传》……”等偏题现象。今年半期考,本地初二年级考的作文题是《世上不只妈妈好》,本文题眼是“不只”,试题形式为逆向思维构思法。但不少考生因听惯了流行歌曲,头脑转不过弯来,偏在“只有”上作文章。有的干脆写只有“爸爸好”、“奶奶好”……令人啼
I. Mistakes in the identification of the eye structure. In the year of 86, the Fujian College Entrance Examination essay was entitled “My Little Man Book.” The structure of the topic is a side-by-side noun phrase. As long as the examinee works on the “and” character, which is both the title and the conjunction, he or she does not usually follow the topic. Unfortunately, many people have taken it lightly and despised the word “and”. In the process of writing, they unconsciously use “yes” for “and”. Then there appeared: “My comic book has more than a thousand books, such as ”The Romance of the Three Kingdoms,“ ”Water Margin,“ ”Yue Fei Biography...“ and so on. In this year’s half-term exam, the essay title for the local first and second grade exams is ”Not only good for mothers in the world,“ but the title of the article is ”not only“, but the examination questions are in reverse thinking. However, many candidates couldn’t turn their heads because they were accustomed to popular songs. Some simply write that ”good dad“ and ”great grandmother" are embarrassing.