“随文练笔”是指依随文本,在阅读教学过程中相机进行的表达训练。在强调“语文课程致力于培养学生的语言文字运用能力”的今天,随文练笔被大量引入课堂,有效地增加了学生的言语实践活动。但与此同时,随文练笔功能被窄化,被简单当作课堂中的一类作业甚至点缀,设计随意、偏离目标、 “With the practice pen ” refers to follow the text, in the process of reading teaching camera expression training. Today, stressing that “Chinese language courses are devoted to cultivating students ’ability of using spoken and written language”, with the introduction of traditional writing pen into classrooms, students’ practice of language practice has been effectively increased. But at the same time, with the function of writing is narrow, it is simply used as a kind of homework in the classroom or even embellished, the design is arbitrary, deviate from the goal,