杜老师:人教版六年级《唯一的听众》一文中“她慈祥的眼神平静地望着我,像深深的潭水……”一句,我认为有些不妥。因为这句话应该理解为“慈祥的眼神”像“深深的潭水”。“眼神”指的是眼睛的神态,不能比喻成“深深的潭水”。而课后的思考练习题中也问:为什么“我”觉得老人的眼睛像“深深的潭水”?所以我认为课文中这句话不妥。不知我这样理解对否,请老师指教,不胜感激!四川省达州市通川区实验小学冉启波 Du teacher: PEP sixth grade “only audience” a “her kind eyes calmly looked at me, like a deep pool of water ... ...”, I think something wrong. Because this sentence should be understood as “kind eyes ” like “deep water ”. “Eyes ” refers to the demeanor of the eyes, can not be compared to “deep water ”. And after-school thinking exercises also asked: Why “I ” think the eyes of the elderly like “deep water ” So I think the sentence in the text is not proper. I do not know if I understand this right, please advise the teacher, greatly appreciated! Tongchuan Experimental Primary School in Dazhou, Sichuan Ran Qi