本文针对学生作文有生活没文采、有模式没思维的情况,从作文取材、作文语言、作文情感三个方面阐释了训练方法。作文时,取材既可以是阅读获得也可以是自己所见所闻所经历的,运用个性化思维或个性化语言形成自我作文风格,用自己最诚挚最高尚的情感思想贯注作文的主旨。 This article aims at the students’ essay that there is no life and no mode of thinking, the mode of training is explained from three aspects: composition, writing language and composition emotion. Composition, the material can be obtained by reading can also be seen and heard what they experience, the use of personalized thinking or personal language to form a self-composition style, with their most sincere and most profound emotional thought focus on the main purpose of composition.