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现代生活节奏的加快,使家庭教育和学校教育片面强调竞争,表现在作文上,就是用正统思想要求学生,用成人目光评价学生,用优秀作文衡量学生,尤其是考场作文,评分标准往往是“中心明确、语句流畅”等冷冰冰的机械的字眼。学生为了他们的命根子——分,不得不揣摩优秀作文的标准,努力迎合“评分者”的喜好,剔除那些可能扣分的东西,编一些假话、空话、套话赢得高分,从而导致真话作文离我们越来越远。如何解决?改革评价标准,鼓励学生我口说我心,我手写我心;鼓励学生自由表达,个性化地表达,自信而本真地表达,写出有真情实感的文章;激发表达欲望;留心生活,丰富体验;创编教材,为真话习作拓展时空。
The accelerating pace of modern life, family education and school education, one-sided emphasis on competition, manifested in the composition, is to use orthodox ideas require students to use adult eyes to evaluate students, with excellent composition to measure students, especially the examination room composition, the score is often “Center clear, smooth sentences,” and other cold machinery words. Students for their lifeblood - points, had to try to figure out outstanding writing standards, and strive to meet “scorers ” preferences, excluding those things that may be deducted points, make some lie, empty talk, curse to win high marks, which Cause the essay composition to be farther and farther away from us. How to solve it? To reform the evaluation criteria to encourage students to speak my heart, I write my heart; Encourage students to freely express, Personalized expression, Confidence and the true expression, Write articles with true feelings; Arouse the desire to express; Life, rich experience; create textbooks, to expand the space for the truth exercises.