一篇习作,最关键的部分就是重点内容。这部分内容如果写不具体,就不能很好地表达文章的主旨。而写不具体,又是同学们在习作中普遍存在的问题。那么,怎样才能把重点内容写具体呢?下面先看一个片段:一个女青年把没了后跟的一只皮鞋递了过去,修鞋师傅看了看,就很快地补起来,不一会儿,就把后跟补上了。——摘自习作《修鞋》很显然,这段话写得太简单、太笼统了,除了说明修鞋师傅修得快以外,人物的特点没有表现出来。读者看了以后就会产生许多疑问:修鞋师傅接过鞋说了些什么?他是怎么修的?修补的质量怎样?因此,只有把 An exercise, the most crucial part is the key content. If this part of the content is not written specifically, it can not express the essence of the article well. The writing is not specific, but also the students in the practice of ubiquitous problems. So how can we focus on the content to write specific? Here’s a look at a fragment: a young woman did not heel a shoe handed over in the past, repair shoe master looked, quickly up, a moment later Make up the heel. - Excerpt from the study “repair shoes” Obviously, this passage is written too simple, too general, in addition to repair shoe repair faster, the characters did not show up. After reading the reader will have a lot of questions: What repair shoe master took the shoes and how is he repaired? How to repair the quality? Therefore, only the