黄伯荣、廖序东先生主编的《现代汉语》(以下简称“黄本”)是大专院校广泛采用的教材之一,某些省、区也把它作为高等自学考试现代汉语的指定用书,其地位即此可见一斑。一九八八年该书经修订重印后质量进一步提高。然而,人们的认识是无止境的,对任何一本教材,无论读者编者总是望其百炼千锤,精益求精。本着这种精神,笔者根据自己在教学中发现的问题,就该教材修辞部份的某些内容提出商榷性的意见和建议。文题既是点评,笔触当不涉及总体构架,论法也自然是随遇而谈,碰到的问题亦大小不弃,并 Modern Chinese “(hereinafter referred to as” Huang "), edited by Huang Boyong and Liao Xuelong, is one of the widely used teaching materials in colleges and universities. Some provinces and autonomous regions also use it as the designated book for modern self-study examinations in modern Chinese, namely, This is evident. In 1988, the book was revised and reprinted to further improve its quality. However, people’s understanding is endless, for any one textbook, regardless of the reader editors are always looking for it to do its best and strive for excellence. In this spirit, based on my own problems found in teaching, the author puts forward some constructive suggestions and suggestions on some contents of the rhetorical part of the textbook. The topic is not only commenting, brush strokes do not involve the overall framework, the law is naturally go with the flow, the problems encountered are not abandoned, and