作家林清玄说:“写作的喜悦来自两个,一个是通过写作去发现生命的更高境界,第二个是通过写作去触及内心更深层部分,这两个是最快乐的。”他说的快乐是时下大部分高中生没有发现的,学生在写作中感受的是痛苦,总是写假话、空话、套话,怎么可能有愉快的体验呢?笔者观察高中生作文的毛病,大都因为写作“诚意”不够,不少学生一写作文,脑子里就出现模式化套路,起承转合都有,就是缺心少肺,味如嚼蜡。有的学生“努力”过头,一味追 Writer Lin Ching-hsun said: “The joy of writing comes from two things: one is to find the higher realm of life through writing, and the second is to touch the deeper part of the inner part through writing, both of which are happiest.” “ Saying that happiness is nowadays most of the high school students did not find that students in the writing experience is painful, always write lies, empty talk, set words, how may have a pleasant experience? I observed the composition of senior high school students problems, mostly because Writing ”sincerity “ is not enough, many students a writing essay, appeared in the minds of the model routines, play the role of transfer are, lack of heart lungs, taste like chewing wax. Some students ”hard " too much, blindly chase