【名师妙语】记事的文章要想感动读者,除语言要真实生动外,更为重要的是要分清内容的主次,突出文章的重点,因此,本文的重点应放在搭错车时作者的表现上,包括对人物的动作、表情、心理活动的刻画,其余的内容则要略写,免得造成喧宾夺主,此外,还要注意条理性。 In addition to the language to be vivid, more important is to distinguish the content of the primary and secondary, highlighting the focus of the article, therefore, the focus of this article should be placed on the performance of the author when riding the wrong car , Including the character’s movements, facial expressions, psychological description of the activities, the rest will have to write a little, so as not to overwhelm the dominant, in addition, but also pay attention to reason.