无意间读到美国“阁楼作家”创始人杰里·克利弗的一本论创意写作的书,说千道万,无非是教人如何学会说故事,要言之:一个好的故事,就是靠冲突、行动、结局、情感、展示五大要素构成。而冲突是要素中的要素,它包括渴望和障碍。因此,我读但及的小说,常常感觉他是骑着马越过一道道障碍,他对节奏的掌握、对起跳时机的选择、对路径的熟悉与障碍物的判断,似乎都能了然于胸,其间偶或出现一两个有惊无险的小动作,也未能 Inadvertently read the United States “Loft writer ” founder Jerry Cleaver’s book on creative writing, saying that a thousand million, is nothing more than teach people how to learn to tell a story, to be fair: a good story is By conflict, action, ending, emotion, display five elements. Conflict is an element of the element, which includes cravings and obstacles. Therefore, the novels I read and often feel that he is riding a horse across a road barrier, his grasp of the rhythm, the timing of the take-off, the path of familiarity and obstacles to judge, it seems clear to the chest In the meantime, there was one or two inadvertently small tricks, nor failed