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提示：每个人都有自己的梦想工作，并立志努力为实现梦想而努力。你的梦想工作是什么？为什么你选择这样的梦想工作？你要如何实现这个梦想呢？请以My Dream Job为题，结合课本知识及自身实际写一篇英语短文。
要求：80词左右。
My dream job is a fantastic job for many people. I want to be a journalist. And I’m going to study hard to make my dream come true.
First， I’m going to write articles and send them to newspapers and magazines. I am going to practice writing something when I have free time. Then， I want to study at a university in Beijing when I finish high school. I will try to get good grades at the university. After that， I want to work at a TV station and travel around the world with my good friends.
As long as I try my best to do what I want to do， everything will not be difficult for me.
【简评】本文主要描述了小作者的梦想工作，My dream job is a fantastic job for many people. I want to be a journalist. 开篇点题。主体部分根据自己的实际情况，分别描述目前、高中以及大学毕业后，制定切实可行的目标为之努力。同时也教育了那些没有理想和目标，有些迷茫的同学，这是本文的成功之处。从语言的使用角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时使用了时间状语从句，条件状语从句和宾语从句。
指导教师：王静
My Dream Job 刘佳怡
Everyone has his dream job. My dream job is to be a doctor，because I think it is the greatest job in the world.
As we know， health is money. But in modern life， many people are not good in health. If I am a doctor， I will help people get rid of their diseases. If I am a doctor， I am going to save people’s lives. If I am a doctor， I will try my best to bring happiness to others.
Then how am I going to do that？ First， I should study hard and do my homework carefully every day. Next I will go to college after high school. Finally， I will work for patients in a hospital in Beijing. I believe my dream will come true one day.
【简评】本文是一篇有关职业梦想的作文，有了梦想，生活才会有目标。小作者充分运用了所学单词、句型、条件状语从句以及一般将来时态。用first， next， finally分3点来说明为梦想工作所做的努力，条理清晰。最后紧扣主题，既是总结又是方向。小作者采用的是总分总的结构，中心明确，是一篇值得借鉴的佳作。
指导教师：曹丽霞
编辑/丁俊玲
要求：80词左右。
My dream job is a fantastic job for many people. I want to be a journalist. And I’m going to study hard to make my dream come true.
First， I’m going to write articles and send them to newspapers and magazines. I am going to practice writing something when I have free time. Then， I want to study at a university in Beijing when I finish high school. I will try to get good grades at the university. After that， I want to work at a TV station and travel around the world with my good friends.
As long as I try my best to do what I want to do， everything will not be difficult for me.
【简评】本文主要描述了小作者的梦想工作，My dream job is a fantastic job for many people. I want to be a journalist. 开篇点题。主体部分根据自己的实际情况，分别描述目前、高中以及大学毕业后，制定切实可行的目标为之努力。同时也教育了那些没有理想和目标，有些迷茫的同学，这是本文的成功之处。从语言的使用角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时使用了时间状语从句，条件状语从句和宾语从句。
指导教师：王静
My Dream Job 刘佳怡
Everyone has his dream job. My dream job is to be a doctor，because I think it is the greatest job in the world.
As we know， health is money. But in modern life， many people are not good in health. If I am a doctor， I will help people get rid of their diseases. If I am a doctor， I am going to save people’s lives. If I am a doctor， I will try my best to bring happiness to others.
Then how am I going to do that？ First， I should study hard and do my homework carefully every day. Next I will go to college after high school. Finally， I will work for patients in a hospital in Beijing. I believe my dream will come true one day.
【简评】本文是一篇有关职业梦想的作文，有了梦想，生活才会有目标。小作者充分运用了所学单词、句型、条件状语从句以及一般将来时态。用first， next， finally分3点来说明为梦想工作所做的努力，条理清晰。最后紧扣主题，既是总结又是方向。小作者采用的是总分总的结构，中心明确，是一篇值得借鉴的佳作。
指导教师：曹丽霞
编辑/丁俊玲