作文教学在语文教学中具有重要地位,作文难这已是广大师生的共识。现在学生的作文普遍存在虚假现象,作文因为题材的虚假而无法具体、生动,无法反映生活的灵气。于是学生作文“优秀”者则虚情假意,以华丽词章掩饰生活理解上的贫乏;差者则任教师百般启迪,无法具体展开,因此真正能 Composition teaching plays an important role in Chinese teaching. It is difficult to write a composition which is the consensus of teachers and students. Nowadays, there is a false phenomenon in students’ compositions. The composition cannot be specific and vivid because of the false subject matter, and it cannot reflect the aura of life. Students’ essays “excellent” are phony and hypocritical. They use gorgeous words to hide the poverty in their life understanding; those who are poor are instructed by teachers and cannot be specifically developed, so they can truly