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编者推荐:①“爱”字立骨。“爱”是“心灵的空间与艺术的空同”的相通点——文章深入地回答了“怎么样拓展心灵的空间与艺术的空间”的问题。②语言符合表述主体的身份。音乐家所见到的穷苦是“房屋四壁的木板就像木制的竖琴一样”。此文可变格用于“付出与回报”话题作文,其变格的措施是:将文中的两句话——“我责无旁贷”和“刚才即兴演奏的曲子是多么的美妙啊”——及其相关内容进行强化并前后呼应。变格后作文的标题为“心灵的等式”。
Editor’s recommendation: 1 “love ” word bone. “Love” is the same point between the “space of the heart and the space of the art” - the article deeply answers the question of “how to expand the space of the mind and the space of the art ”. 2 Languages are consistent with the identity of the subject. The hardships seen by the musicians are “like wooden boards like wooden harp.” This article can be used as a “comments and rewards” topic essay. The measures for disqualification are: how wonderful the two sentences in the text—“I’m obliged to swear” and “just improvised” Ah“ - and its related content are strengthened and echoed before and after. The title of the essay after the transition is ”The equation of mind".