金学小朋友的作文《爱》,写的是亲姐妹之间朝夕相处欢乐与痛苦交织的生活体验,中心是妹妹如何享受着姐姐的爱。文章的一大特色是比较细腻地刻画了姐姐鲜明、丰富的性格,线索清晰,都围绕着爱与被爱这条主线展开。首先,文章重点描写了姐姐对妹妹无私的爱。姐姐性格温和,爱笑,而且 Jin Xue's essay “Love”, written by the sister-in-law is a mixture of joy and painful life experiences. The center is how her sister enjoys her sister's love. One of the major features of the article is that the delicate and vivid character of the elder sister is vividly depicted and the clues are clearly defined. All of these revolve around the main line of love and being loved. First of all, the article focuses on the sister's sister's selfless love. Sister gentle personality, love to laugh, but also