爱好写诗的朋友:你寄我的诗作看了。关于你的诗,以及关于诗的写作,我觉得有话要说,所以给你回了这封长信。“具象”是好诗的基础你的这批诗中,《文化中国》《激情牧羊——写在广州亚运会即将开幕之际》《我愿意是春天的红杜鹃》《幸福约定》《中国魂》应该算是场面诗,意象宽泛,内容空洞的“主旋律”很让人不以为然。我觉得,诗的语感、诗的语言你是有的,但这种诗,也不独是你,都有一种不好的特点,就 Friends who love to write poems: You sent me a poem to read. About your poetry, and about the writing of poetry, I feel that there is something to say, so I will give you this long letter. “Figurative ” is the basis of a good poem In your poems, “Culture of China” “passion Shepherd - written on the occasion of the opening of the Guangzhou Asian Games” “I am willing to spring red azaleas” “Happiness Agreement” Chinese soul “should be regarded as the scene poetry, the image is broad, the content of the hollow ” main theme "is very disagreeable. I think the language of poetry, the language of poetry you have, but this poem, not only you, have a bad feature, it