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Hello， everybody. I’m Chen Yanran. Today I’m so happy to give my opinions to you.
I like watching soap operas. Some people think they are boring and meaningless. But I think they are relaxing and funny. Because I like to follow the story and see what happens next. I also like watching the news. They may not be very exciting or interesting， but I think they are useful and educational. I hope to find out what’s going on around the world. I like sitcomes and comedies very much， because they are very funny. They always make me laugh. When I watch them， I will be so happy. I don’t mind sports shows and talk shows. I think they are boring. You know I don’t like doing sports， although doing sports is good for me.
These are my opinions. What are your opinions？
肖晋波老师点评：
本文是八年级学生的一篇课堂作文，是关于对各类电视节目的看法。文章一开始就点题，愿与大家分享自己的观点，然后选择了几种典型的电视节目，如肥皂剧、新闻、情景喜剧、体育节目和访谈节目进行了观点表达，同时也猜想了其他人的观点。本文表达清晰，进行细节描述时词汇运用丰富，很有条理性，且观点鲜明。较丰富的细节描写也为此篇文章增色不少。本篇文章基本上不用修改。当然文章中也存在单词拼写错误，如sitcomes应该是sitcoms， 以及语法运用错误，如news应该是不可数名词，代词应该是it。
Hello， everybody. I’m Chen Yanran. Today I’m so happy to share my opinions with you.
I like watching soap operas. Some people think they are boring and meaningless. But I think they are relaxing and funny， because I like to follow the story and see what happens next. I also like watching TV news. It may not be very exciting or interesting， but I think it is useful and educational. I hope to find out what’s going on around the world. I like sitcoms and comedies very much， because they are very funny. They always make me laugh. When I watch them， I will be so happy. I don’t love sports shows or talk shows. I think they are boring. You know I’m not interested in doing sports， although doing sports is good for me.
These are my opinions， and what about yours？
I like watching soap operas. Some people think they are boring and meaningless. But I think they are relaxing and funny. Because I like to follow the story and see what happens next. I also like watching the news. They may not be very exciting or interesting， but I think they are useful and educational. I hope to find out what’s going on around the world. I like sitcomes and comedies very much， because they are very funny. They always make me laugh. When I watch them， I will be so happy. I don’t mind sports shows and talk shows. I think they are boring. You know I don’t like doing sports， although doing sports is good for me.
These are my opinions. What are your opinions？
肖晋波老师点评：
本文是八年级学生的一篇课堂作文，是关于对各类电视节目的看法。文章一开始就点题，愿与大家分享自己的观点，然后选择了几种典型的电视节目，如肥皂剧、新闻、情景喜剧、体育节目和访谈节目进行了观点表达，同时也猜想了其他人的观点。本文表达清晰，进行细节描述时词汇运用丰富，很有条理性，且观点鲜明。较丰富的细节描写也为此篇文章增色不少。本篇文章基本上不用修改。当然文章中也存在单词拼写错误，如sitcomes应该是sitcoms， 以及语法运用错误，如news应该是不可数名词，代词应该是it。
Hello， everybody. I’m Chen Yanran. Today I’m so happy to share my opinions with you.
I like watching soap operas. Some people think they are boring and meaningless. But I think they are relaxing and funny， because I like to follow the story and see what happens next. I also like watching TV news. It may not be very exciting or interesting， but I think it is useful and educational. I hope to find out what’s going on around the world. I like sitcoms and comedies very much， because they are very funny. They always make me laugh. When I watch them， I will be so happy. I don’t love sports shows or talk shows. I think they are boring. You know I’m not interested in doing sports， although doing sports is good for me.
These are my opinions， and what about yours？