对古今“两位人物”自始至终称“职分”,将主旨定位于“当今官员区别于旧官员——公而忘私。但是,还需要升格:第一,标题中的“门”字前应加一“家”字——凸显对比参照点。第二,任局长第二次“刚推开门”应同第三次“走到门口”互换——层层深入。第三,任局长“三过其家门而不入”的事,应全是“公安”的事——个性化。 For the “two people” from ancient times to the present, they called the “divisions” and positioned the subject as “the officials are different from the old officials—the public forgets the private. However, they still need to upgrade: First, the word “door” in the title should be Adding a “home” word - highlighting the reference point of reference. Second, the second term of the director’s “just pushing open the door” should be interchanged with the third “going to the doorway” - in-depth. “Three things that go beyond their homes” should all be “Public Security” - personalization.