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夏日的傍晚,我骑上自行车,直奔学校。 [首句即入题,交代了时间、人物、地点、事件的开始。] 车过湖滨公园,只见西湖沐浴在夕阳的余辉里,分外娇美。湖边的林荫道上,儿童车上娃娃的笑脸,情侣们的身影,都给西湖的晚景增添了温馨、欢乐的气氛。 [写西湖的娇美晚景和欢乐的气氛,为下文表现作者此时赶去上夜校的苦读精神作了生动的映衬。] 这条上学必经之路,我不知走过多少回;这傍晚的情景,也时时唤起我甜美的回忆。可是,今天
On a summer evening, I rode a bike and headed straight to school. [The first sentence is the entry question, which explains the beginning of time, person, place, and event. ] Car over Lakeside Park, I saw the West Lake bathed in the sunset afterglow, exceptionally charming. On the lakeside avenue, the smiling faces of the dolls on the children’s car and the figures of the couple all add a warm and happy atmosphere to the evening scene of the West Lake. [Writing the splendid evening scene and joyful atmosphere of the West Lake is vividly illustrated by the spirit of hard reading that the author expressed at this time rushing to the evening school. This is the only way to go to school. I don’t know how many times I have gone. This evening scene also evokes my sweet memories. However, today