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★评委意见:文字清新秀逸、亲切委婉,语言流畅,行文舒展自如,自然洒脱,将成长融入到路边的梧桐树里,跟着它一同成长,共同经历那些悲喜。等时光逝去,留在记忆里的,仍旧是那一年异常葱翠的梧桐。(夏玉如)梧桐叶影,幻化出点点忧伤;秋风萧瑟,轻拂出丝丝欢笑。再一次踏上这条路,心却不复从前。——题记六年前的夏末,我激动地踏上了这条小路。上小学的欣喜令我永生难忘,已记不清第一堂课是什么,清晰的是那天路旁的一排梧桐异常苍翠,仿佛
★ Judge Opinion: The text fresh Xiuyi, cordial euphemism, language fluency, ease of writing freely, natural free and easy, the growth into the roadside trees, along with it grow together to experience those joys and sorrows. Waiting for time, left in the memory, is still unusually lush Indus. (Xia Yu Ru) Indus leaf shadow, turned a little sad; autumn wind bleak, flick out of the slightest laughter. Once again set foot on this road, the heart is no longer in the past. - Inscription Six years ago in late summer, I excitedly set foot on this path. The joy of elementary school made me unforgettable. I could not remember what was the first lesson. It was clear that a row of parasol beside the road was unusually green,