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本文以2016年高考一些湖南考生的作文为例,指出三个普遍存在的问题,希望能为参加2017年高考的考生带来帮助。审题不准2016年高考,湖南考生使用的是全国卷一,试题材料是如下一幅漫画。(据夏明作品改动)部分考生在审题立意时出了问题,主要表现在以下三个方面。其一,立意脱离试题材料。部分考生选择的写作角度或确定的立意与试题材料无关,无法得到材料内容的有效支持。比如:考场作文《进步不可缺失》,标题似乎与试题材料有关。但是,文章并不是结合试题材料提出这一观点的,而是着重写好奇、
Taking the compositions of some Hunan candidates in the college entrance examination in 2016 as an example, this article points out three ubiquitous problems and hopes to help candidates who take the 2017 college entrance examination. Exam questions are not allowed 2016 college entrance examination, Hunan candidates using the national volume one, the test materials are as follows a comic. (According to Xia Ming’s work changes) Some candidates in the trial of the idea of a problem, mainly in the following three aspects. First, the intention from the test material. Some candidates choose the writing point of view or to determine the meaning of the test material has nothing to do with the material can not be effectively supported. For example: exam essay “progress can not be missed,” the title seems to be related to the test materials. However, the article is not combined with the test materials put forward this view, but focus on writing curiosity,