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金友斌同志: 翻开《山花》九月号,读了你給編輯部的信和《进村》一诗后,知道你“非常喜爱读詩和写诗”,习作已将近一年了。因为“还未发表过一首”,使你“非常的苦恼、遗憾”。你问:是你的詩缺乏思想性呢,还是技巧有问题?是語言不洗炼呢,还是报刊不发表初学写作者的作品?問題究竟在哪哩?对你的情况我不了解,作为一个讀者,我想根据你的信和诗,談一谈我的浅見,供你參考。
Comrade Jin Youbin: After opening the September issue of “Mountain Flowers”, after reading your letter to the editorial office and the poem “Entering the Village,” you know that you are “very fond of reading poetry and writing poetry.” The work has been going on for almost a year. Because “not yet published one”, you “very distressed and regrettable.” You ask: Is your poem lacking ideological or technical problems? Is it because the language does not wash? Is it because the press does not publish the works of beginner writers? Where is the problem? I don’t understand your situation, as a reader , I would like to talk about my views based on your letter and poetry for your reference.