无论是写人、叙事还是写景的作文,都离不开一定的情感。可是眼下的现状却是小学生作文里空话假话一大堆,有些学生甚至认为用上几个“啊、呀”之类的词就是抒情了。其实,这样的“情”是不能感人的。下面笔者就小学生作文缺乏真情之原因、对策等作一简述。一、“造假”案例1.胡编式作文。习作《我的妈妈》,80%的学生习作都选取了自己生病时妈妈是如何背自己去医院看 Either writing, narrative or writing scenery of the composition, are inseparable from some emotions. But now the status quo is a lot of empty talk in the composition of primary school students, and some students even think that using a few “ah, ah ” and the like is lyrical. In fact, this “love ” can not be touching. The following author on the lack of truth in the composition of primary school students, such as a brief description of the strategy. First, “fake ” Case 1. Hu braid composition. Exercises as “my mom”, 80% of the student work are selected when their own sick mother go back to the hospital