编者推荐：“两张发黄的作文纸平静地躺在皮包的夹层里”已经保存了四年——其中“夹层”蕴含丰富,感情真挚；“望见家里有灯光,心中便涌起一股暖流……看到爸爸微笑的睑,喉咙哽咽着匆匆走进我的房间”——感受真切,忍痛不露。此文还需要升格,升格的措施是：详写一个互相关爱的超常举动。标题宜改为“收藏的作文”。 Editor’s recommendation: “Two yellow writing papers lie quietly in the mezzanine of the bag” has been preserved for four years - the “mezzanine” contains rich, sincere feelings; “looking at the lights at home, my heart will be filled with a surge The warm current... I saw Dad smiled, and he hurried into my room with his throat in his throat.” - Feeling real and reluctant. This article also needs to be upgraded. The measures for promotion are: Write an extraordinary act of mutual love. The title should be changed to ”Collection of Compositions".