每每在读那些高段孩子的作文时,总感觉丝丝的担忧与遗憾,在大多数孩子的字里行间里,我们搜寻不到天真烂漫的童趣,品读不到娇憨逗人的童语,感受不到妙趣横生的奇思怪想,触摸不到纯洁无暇的童心,我们看到的是单调乏味的语言,几近千篇一律的内容和模式化的结构,是什么原因使孩子们如此曼妙的童年在呈现于纸面、倾注于笔端的刹那黯然失色,是什么原 Often when reading those high school children’s composition, always feel slightest concern and regret that in most children’s lines between the lines, we can not find innocent children’s innocence, can not read Jiao Han’s cute Tongue, feel not To the funny whimsical, touching innocent childlike innocence, we see the monotonous language, the almost stereotyped content and the pattern of the structure, what makes the children so graceful childhood presented in the Paper, pour at the tip of the moment eclipsed, what is the original