“李四光用他的学识、他的智慧,为我国描绘了多么美丽的石油、煤炭、金属、非金属、稀有元素、分散元素等矿产资源的远景啊!”这是报告文学作家徐迟的作品《地质之光》中的一个句子(文章选入初中语文课本第六册,这句话见现行教材P.90-91)。这是个病句。首先,从逻辑的概念关系上看,“石油、煤炭、金属、非金属、稀有元素、分散元素”之间不是并列关系的。金属中有一部分是稀有元素、分散 “With his knowledge and his wisdom, Li Siguang has painted a beautiful vision of our country’s mineral resources such as petroleum, coal, metals, nonmetals, rare elements, and scattered elements!” This is a report writer Xu Chi’s work “ A sentence in Geological Lights (the article was selected in Book 6 of the junior high school language textbook. See the current textbook P.90-91). This is a disease sentence. First of all, from the perspective of the concept of logical relations, ”oil, coal, metals, non-metals, rare elements, and scattered elements" are not parallel to each other. Some of the metal is a rare element, scattered