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洛阳大规模工业建设伊始,我来到九朝古都,在一个大型企业做技术工作,与工人朝夕相处,他们意气风发,忘我劳动,许多可歌可泣的人物,常常让我感动,难以忘怀。于是,我就写了《寿师傅》投寄《牡丹》。很快便收到了编辑的来信,出我意料的是来信比我的稿子还长。来信对拙作的结构、人物、故事、语言进行了全面分析,指出优劣之处,并提出修改建议。我按其指点把稿子修改一遍,不久便刊出了。我受到极大的鼓舞,创作欲望更为强烈。第二年又在《奔流》上发表三篇小说,评论家写了点评文
At the beginning of the large-scale industrial construction in Luoyang, I came to the ancient capital of the nine dynasties, did technical work in a large enterprise, dealt with the workers from day to night, and they were very energetic and selfless workers. Many epic figures made me moved and unforgettable. So, I wrote “Master Shou” posting “Peony.” I soon received an editorial letter, out of my expectation letter is longer than my manuscript. The letter made a comprehensive analysis of the structure, characters, stories and languages of the book, pointing out advantages and disadvantages and putting forward suggestions for revision. I press the manuscript to modify it again, soon published. I was greatly encouraged, creative desire more intense. The following year, he also published three novels on “Running”, and commentators wrote reviews