标题中的“新”字饱含对“棒棒军”的赞美之情。从正面写此情,如对“挑”字的描述,使人自然联想到“力拔山兮气盖世”;还用衬托写此情,有正衬,还有反衬,使人自然联想到“一道亮丽的风景”——作者的赞美之情植根在生动的描写之中。但是,第二自然段最后两个字应改为“力量”! The word “new” in the title is full of praise for the “Bandstick Army.” Write this situation from the front, such as the description of the word “pick”, which naturally reminds people of “the power to pull the mountains and live in the world”; also writing against this situation, there is a positive lining, and there is a contrast, which naturally reminds people of “ A beautiful landscape - the author’s praise is rooted in a vivid description. However, the last two words of the second paragraph should be changed to “power!”