这部小说的语言自然流畅,不造作,行文中并没有很多中学生喜欢的华丽词藻的堆砌,人物的描绘是素描式的,然而层次丰富,不呆板,对人物的心理刻画细腻而自然,作者善于用朴素的生活化的语言,勾勒生动的场面,营造激情的气氛。读这部小说的感觉,仿佛是走进了中学生的生活,情不自禁地会被他们清纯的青春气息所感染。一个17岁的中学生,第一部小说就能达到这样的水 The language of the novel is natural and smooth. There are not many piles of splendid words that middle school students like. The depiction of characters is sketch-style. However, the layers are rich and not rigid. The characters’ psychological description is delicate and natural. The author is good at With a plain language of living, we outline vivid scenes and create a passionate atmosphere. The feeling of reading this novel seems to have entered the life of a middle school student and can not help but be infected by their pure youthful atmosphere. A 17-year-old middle school student, the first novel can achieve such a water