春秋哪得悠闲歇,高空架起朝天阙。莫道不风情,万家灯火明。晚归星月下,鬓发冰霜挂。汗水透棉衣,艰辛谁又知?(2015.08《中华诗词》)宋彩霞点评:开句“春秋哪得悠闲歇,高空架起朝天阙”二句描写人物的工作环境、性质与身份。架线工一年四季劳作在施工现场,早出晚归哪里有得闲的时候。“悠闲歇”稍嫌意重。作者把架起的一座座铁塔比喻成朝天阙。“朝天阙”句新颖,少有人这样搭配用。 Spring and autumn which had leisure break, sky erected chaos days. Mau is not style, thousands of lights. Night of the moon and stars, 鬓 hair frost hanging. (2015.08 “Chinese Poetry”) Song Caixia Comments: Opened sentence “Spring and Autumn which had leisure break, high sky set Chaotianque ” two describes the character’s work environment, nature and identity. Lineman work throughout the year in the construction site, where to go early and late when there is leisure time. “Leisure break ” a bit intentional. The author erected a Tower Tower Chaotianque. “Chaotianque ” sentence novel, few people use such a match.