张祖平 男，80后英语教师，就职于浙江省绍兴市树人中学，爱好翻译，勤于写作。在英语教学中，注重分层教学，尤其善于激励英语基础薄弱的学生，用他们的兴趣爱好，引领他们进行愉快的英语阅读。自主研发的“E飞英语口语考试小程序”荣获2018年绍兴市教师自制教具比赛一等奖。
　　Hi， I’m Cindy. I have four good friends. They’re Jim、Kate、①Jenny and Bob. Jim’s favorite subject is computer. He likes it because he wants to be a programer②. He has computer lesson③ on Monday and Friday. Kate likes science best. She says it’s useful. She has science on Tuesday. What about Jenny and Bob？ Oh， Chinese is Jenny’s favorite subject. She thinks it’s difficult but interesting. She likes Chinese because she likes her Chinese teacher， Miss Li. Jenny has Chinese every morning. Bob does well in sports， so he likes P.E. best. He has P.E. every Wednesday. He dreams of joining the national sport team④.
　　浙江省绍兴市树人中学（75）班 丁峰
　　1. 优点：
　　作者介绍了四个好朋友最喜欢的学科和喜欢的理由，条理清楚、用词丰富，句型多样。作者把动词第三人称单数likes， has， says， thinks， does， dreams等都写對了，这点尤其值得点赞。此外，作者还用了and，because，so等连词，使文章更加连贯。末句的dream of doing结构画龙点睛，可见小作者平时善于积累。
　　2. 需要修改的地方：
　　①英语中并列词语之间一般用逗号，不用顿号。
　　②programer改为programmer，前者为拼写错误。
　　③lesson改为lessons，此处用复数泛指该课程。
　　④sport team改为sports team。
　　3. 评分：
　　按照中考英语作文满分20分的评分标准，本文修改前可得16～17分。