最近,我写了一篇《我爱西湖六月荷》,老师说写得不错,景物描写有特点,很细致、很生动,让我谈谈体会。我又重新将自己的这篇文章读了读,觉得我这次描写景物,在以下两个方面做得比较好。一、以动写静,动静结合。动静结合是描写景物的一个很重要的手法,可是,有的景物动感很明显,如波涛、流云、奔马、飞鸟等等,而有的景物却好像很难发现它的动感,如树木、花卉等等。荷花、荷叶,如果静态地看,当然也很美,可是描写满湖的荷花荷叶,只有静态描写肯定不行。那么,如何写出荷花、荷叶的“动”呢?看 Recently, I wrote an article entitled “I Love June Lotus in the West Lake.” The teacher said that writing is good. Scenery description has characteristics that are meticulous and vivid. Let me talk about my experience. I read again this article, I think this description of scenery, in the following two aspects do better. First, to write static, static and dynamic combination. However, some of the scenery is very dynamic, such as waves, clouds, running horses, birds, etc., and some scenery seems difficult to find its dynamic, such as trees, Flowers and more. Lotus, lotus leaf, if the static point of view, of course, is also beautiful, but describe the lotus lotus lake, only the static description certainly not. So, how to write the lotus, lotus leaf “move”? Look