[整理说明]这是丁玲关于《在医院中》的一份检讨与说明,大约写于一九四二年下半年。原稿有两个部分:一部分是钢笔稿,即前两个小标题下边的文字,写在横格笔记本纸上,正反两页共计四面;其余均为铅笔稿,在粗糙的有格稿纸上分左右栏书写,合计三十三面。由于年代久远,涂抹改动较多,大部分原稿又是用铅笔写成,所以许多地方字迹已经不清楚。加之这些草稿没有标注页码,上下页之间如何衔接也颇费了一番脑筋。我只是根据自己的理解和揣测,把这些手稿整理抄录于此。原则是:一、全部按原样照录;二、错别字一般不作修改,个别修改处在[]中用黑体字标出;三、为了有助于研究者了解丁玲写作时的思路,有些删掉的文字也在[]中用黑体字作了恢复,并用楷体字加以说明;四、原稿中的小标题体例有些杂乱,这里一仍其旧;现在的顺序是我根据内容编排的,其中第三节有三个开头,以下全部照录。读者可予注意的一点是,文中用楷体标示的内容皆为抄录者的说明文字。——王增如 [Finishing Instructions] This is Ding Ling’s review and explanation on “In the Hospital,” written about in the second half of 1942. The manuscript has two parts: one is the fountain pen, that is, the text below the first two subheadings, written on the lined notebook paper, positive and negative pages totaling four sides; the rest are pencil drafts, Left and right columns to write a total of thirty-three surface. Due to the age, smear changes more, most of the original is written in pencil, so many local writing is not clear. In addition to these drafts are not marked page number, how the convergence between the upper and lower pages also took a lot of brains. I just copy and transcribe the manuscripts according to my own understanding and speculation. The principles are: First, all are recorded as they are; Second, the typos are generally not modified. Some of the typos are marked in [] in bold. Third, in order to help researchers understand the thinking of Ding Ling when writing, some deleted The text was also restored in [...] in bold letters and illustrated in italics. 4. The subheadings in the manuscript were a bit messy, and here they are still old; the order is now based on the contents of the third section There are three at the beginning, all the following recorded. The reader may note that the text in italics are all transcribe the caption. - Wang Zengru