青年学生,处在特定的年龄阶段,拥有特定的心理特征。他们的注意力更多地关注自己生理和心理的变化,他们有非常强烈的自我意识。在作文中描写自己或者表达自己是他们所擅长的,“我认为”是他们非常喜欢用的一个词语。这种“关注自我”的思维倾向,有其有利的一面,但一味地“关注自我”,必然会阻碍学生作文能力的发展。在作文中具体表现为取材范围狭窄,对事物的认识肤浅等。 Young students are at a specific age and have specific psychological characteristics. Their attention is more concerned with their physical and psychological changes, and they have a very strong sense of self. Writing or expressing yourself in the composition is what they are good at. “I think” is a word they like very much. This kind of “self-conscious” thinking tends to have its favorable side, but blindly “focusing on self” will inevitably hinder the development of students’ writing ability. In the essay, the specific performance of the narrow range of materials, superficial understanding of things and so on.