一、编者这样改动原文,好不好?毕淑敏《我很重要》原文:“只要计算一下我们一生吃进去多少谷物,饮下了多少清水,才凝聚成一具美轮美奂的躯体,我们一定会为那数字的庞大而惊讶。”课文:“只要计算一下我们一生吃进去多少谷物,饮下了多少清水,才凝聚成这具美好的躯体,我们一定会为那数字的庞大而惊讶。”改动(1):“一”改为“这”;改动(2):“美轮美奂”改为“美好”。从有助于学生学习规范语 First, the editors change the original text, okay? Bi Shumin “I am very important,” the original: “” Just count how much grain we eat in our life, how much water to drink, condensed into an aesthetically beautiful body, we must Will be amazed by the size of the figure. “Text:” Just counting how much grain we had in our life and how much water we had before we could condense into a beautiful body, we would surely be surprised at the size of the figure Change “(1): ” a “to ” this “; change (2): ” beautiful “to” beautiful ". Learn to regulate language from helping students